I really love the colour scheme you have used, as it comes together really nicely. I think that you need to include more cover-lines on the front cover as it looks a bit bare though, and it's quite hard to tell which genre you are representing. I think the contents page will look good when it comes together as it looks as if it will contain a lot of content and isn't too simple but also isn't too busy. I like the font you haved used, too. Well Done
Firstly, i honestly love your colour scheme and how your pictures go so well with the whole magazine. Secondly, the name you have used is very intriguing and unique, the name alone makes you want to read the magazine, overall i really like your magazine, but something you can improve would be if you added more text on your front cover (im assuming you have not completed?)
your colour scheme is really really nice... and the pictures you have taken is really professionally taken. Improvements Front cover - Add coverlines probably white on the left and right of abigials head so they also standout.. Content page - the layout is calm .. Now you just need to fill up the blank spaces with related tx in your presentation and what your mag is about DPS - Ask me
Your colour scheme on your magazine is very well thought because they all complete eachother. I think for your front cover you should add cover lines,add barcode and issue number.
I really love the colour scheme you have used, as it comes together really nicely. I think that you need to include more cover-lines on the front cover as it looks a bit bare though, and it's quite hard to tell which genre you are representing. I think the contents page will look good when it comes together as it looks as if it will contain a lot of content and isn't too simple but also isn't too busy. I like the font you haved used, too. Well Done
ReplyDeleteFirstly, i honestly love your colour scheme and how your pictures go so well with the whole magazine. Secondly, the name you have used is very intriguing and unique, the name alone makes you want to read the magazine, overall i really like your magazine, but something you can improve would be if you added more text on your front cover (im assuming you have not completed?)
ReplyDeleteyour colour scheme is really really nice... and the pictures you have taken is really professionally taken.
ReplyDeleteImprovements Front cover - Add coverlines probably white on the left and right of abigials head so they also standout..
Content page - the layout is calm .. Now you just need to fill up the blank spaces with related tx in your presentation and what your mag is about
DPS - Ask me
Your colour scheme on your magazine is very well thought because they all complete eachother. I think for your front cover you should add cover lines,add barcode and issue number.
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